Tuesday, October 30, 2007

My results in test


Mistakes in memo



This is a pic I snapped from the notice board of a university.
But my phone didn’t catch whole part so I’ll write it down.

ATTENTION STUDENTS

1) Due to some difficulty of clash class, schedule of august 2007 semester have been change, all students please be aware of the new time table.
2) Class for the Research Method in Education will combine with Research Method in Social Science (SBB 3014), that is in Monday, 4.00pm-6.00pm at SGT4.
3) If there any clashes class in the new time table, please kindly fill the form provided.


Gosh, this is bad (in my opinion)
This is broken English and it is on the notice board. I’m not too good in English but even I, know that there are mistakes.
i) What is clash class? I know everybody know what it is by common sense but isn’t it supposed to be class clashing…… wait, supposed it is ‘crashing’ , right? I’m getting confused.
ii) And what is due to some difficulty of clash class? The sentence seems very weird to me … -_-
iii) The (…..august 2007 semester have been change…) got a mistake. I think it is have been changed .
iv) At the second sentence, the (….that is in Monday….) seems weird too. I mean people do use the word but never I saw they use it like that. I prefer ‘that’s in Monday’ but then again , when used in full sentence , ……abnormal it seems.


Haha , that’s all I think it the mistakes.

Chapter one : The grave entrance


I’m a muggle . With my friend Lei , we enters an unknown wizardry school under the advise of a corrupted wizard. Plain speaking, we have been cheated by him. Inside this school, the population is made up by 80% pure bloods , 17% half bloods and the remaining , us muggles. We have a hard time here because we just don’t belong there. After a week starting the lesson, Lei have been attacked by trolls and her belongings are gone in the attack. She starts thinking about quitting the school and I would follow her if she really quits. But the problem is I’ve paid a sum of gold to study in the school so it would be really hard leaving the school and wasting all my golds.
Later on , Lei tell me that she is going to continue the study . Problems after problems appears after the attack. We are having a hard time adjusting ourselves in the guild. I never know that pure bloods never sleep early. We muggles are used sleeping early if nothing happens but these people really weird. They have nothing to do but yet, they never sleep early. The problem is they don’t close the light and it’s scorching hot. Me and Lei, being on the upper bunk are roasting alive. Not only they sleep late, they also make quite a noise. Their laugh so shrill that it sends shivers all over my body and thus awakening me from my sleep.
We complain to the professors to move out from the guild but the headmaster says we have signed the contract parchment and we must stay in the guild for one season.
We were bitter but there’s nothing we can do.
So, we try our best to go home as soon as possible when the lesson’s over in weekends.

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